It sounds nice, but doesn't feel like a solid tune.
It sounds nice, but doesn't feel like a solid tune.
Thank you so much for the feedback!
Cool! The second lead could be less sharp maybe.
Thanks for the advice! Song will be fixed soon after the new song upload.
very nice. maybe I am not used to microtuning but the guitar sounds for me a bit out of tune sometimes in the acoustic part.
Could be the intonation on the guitar I used, or accidental string bending while play. It wasn't the easiest song to transpose to guitar and clean parts require more accuracy while playing so I think I just needed to nail it better. Thanks for the review :)
is it okay that it has noise between phrases? gate could be used to turn it down between phrases.
Thanks for the tip. I'm a little new to the software so I don't exactly know how to get rid of those. I use logic pro x . Any help is appreciated.
good, but needs the voice I think.
Indeed, this is where you the people step in :)
OK, not bad. Also why you didn't put a link to bandcamp page?
Edited the description.
Needs better work on mixing. Sounds kinda overcompressed?
Thanks for the response. Yeah, mixing is something I'm pretty bad at, and I've been working on it but it's difficult for me.
The problem here is it sounds like used some default FL drum samples. Maybe it's not so. But it does sound like that. Maybe it's just me. The music is fine. I voted 4.
The hat is classic i like it that's why i use it but i can try to make my newer songs with other drums.
This feels like lacking in low frequencies. The calm part is very nice.
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oh common! that's definatelly missing the bass!
We did consider bass, though in the end we (well more me, I suppose) opted for just percussion. It skips a few beats so a groove might've been odd or hard to sync... or just what it needed, maybe. :) Hope it turned out pretty well even without though! Thanks for the comment.
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