Not bad. But too distorted. Don't limit that much. And there might be some mixing problems.
Not bad. But too distorted. Don't limit that much. And there might be some mixing problems.
thanks
ok. the first part, not liked much. the second part is nice. but has some dissonant notes that feel out of tune. also there is some clicking happens sometimes.
Thanks!
This song has always felt a little off tbh, and started off as an experimental. I'm glad you liked some of it!
the delay echo is missing.
Where and what kind of delay echo, for which plugin or sound and what should it rather sound like?
Feels a bit too noisy for me. I would cut or reduce some highs on the background instruments to avoid this bright noise feeling. But maybe just my taste. The piano maybe pops out too much. The STR Pizz need echo when it plays without piano.
Thanks for the input! This is probably a lesson in caution to me. I went from mixing a metal track with loud instruments to mixing this and ended up compressing them similarly. Being myself, I assumed that even ambient tracks need to compete with in the loudness war. You are right, I should have backed off on some instruments and some frequencies. I actually didn't think of throwing an echo on those pizzicato strings, but now that you mention it... that sounds genius.
Thanks again!
Nice. But the lead... It's too piercing. Did you set high frequencies up for it? Well, reduce them.
I think the lead sound totally in general doesn't fit this song, but I tried going through a ton of different sounding leads and I just couldn't seem to make one fit very well.
oh.. I don't know about this. That piano, I don't understand it. Maybe to keep it more on background, no need to be that loud. I mean the low notes. And the song needs bass.
Nice smooth jazz stuff. I guess those are not live instruments tho?
All the sounds are FL samples. Thanks for the review.
Pretty cool song. Probably needs sidechain on the ride cymbals(or just lower level) and more click to the kick so it would be more pronounced.
Ah, I was having trouble getting the drums to sound, right. I tried what you suggested, and it does make the drums work so much better with this tune. Too late to upload it now, but this information will help my future projects go a lot smoother. Thank you for the feedback and rate!
Has potential probably. The melodies parts are just not match each other. You need develop your notes hearing.
Thanks. I appreciate the feedback. :)
Nice chiptune :)
thx :) you've got some nice chiptune too :o
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