I like the melody. It's very not mainstream. The wobble has too harsh quality.
I like the melody. It's very not mainstream. The wobble has too harsh quality.
ok ill try to improve on that.
also i would suggest looking at my other songs.
and it would help a lot if you considered following me but you dont have do :D.
The beat is fine. But some things not too fine. For example that piano. Not sure what to do with it, but when it's full opened it doesn't sound right.
Not bad. Some things are a bit unbalanced. For example that tambourine is way too loud.
well, you don't need this. try to stay in level with pop music and it will be better.
OK, then put a link to your album. Nice work. But I would prefer a bit different sound I think. More soothing. So it would work as lulaby you know?
Can be a pop song as well as rap.
yeah
Nice song with a bright pleasing guitar. It maybe sticks out even a bit too much. Consider to rebalance and make drums a bit forward and guitar a bit back.
But too short. I guess would work on some short pop up in the game.
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