Hello!
Please help me with spelling.
Here is the screens with the text:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/67076549/scr een-test-01.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/67076549/scr een-test-02.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/67076549/scr een-test-03.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/67076549/scr een-test-04.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/67076549/scr een-test-05.jpg
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Help with spelling
Posted by GameBalance - June 3rd, 2013
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To add to what RobbieSkater posted:
more challengeS <jpg1 (or a different first word, for example 'a bigger' challenge)
On jpg3 and 4, you might want to add A or The at the start of the sentences.
On jpg5, you might want to simplify a bit, like 'Progress bars for both goals'.
Looks good!
Thanks!
Yeah the game is awesome. It's a simple concept chain reaction but it's very great, just like Nuclearoids(not very similar but as simple and good).
RobbieSkater
you've got (THESE) achievements <jpg1
create (A) chain reaction <jpg 2.
and say blow (up) <not just blow ....
other than that its OKAY!
GameBalance
Thanks!