RobbieSkater 2013-06-03 11:47:42

you've got (THESE) achievements <jpg1

create (A) chain reaction <jpg 2.

and say blow (up) <not just blow ....
other than that its OKAY!

Cyberdevil 2013-06-03 12:05:50

To add to what RobbieSkater posted:

more challengeS <jpg1 (or a different first word, for example 'a bigger' challenge)
On jpg3 and 4, you might want to add A or The at the start of the sentences.

On jpg5, you might want to simplify a bit, like 'Progress bars for both goals'.

Looks good!